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Usually i'd like to make storys that take up a few chapters or so and while the length overall might be short i try to make each of them count. And even with this one i meant for it to be in chapters initially but it just came out as this a single short story and boy did i have a lot of fun with this one.
Sorry i have been abscent for a while, still disheartened about my "Room of Requirements" story being taken down and i know its strange that my comeback (after another 2 month hiatus as well) is only a page but i am trying with the ideas i have. The ones that Vertigor gave and the ones that i have in general but i am trying to get out of my rut with the storys development so hopefully i will, but in the mean time i hope you enjoy this brief but hopefully fun story.
Original Image based on : flockchan.deviantart.com/art/E…
(This wasn't a commision or anything just a very great respect for the art and intrest in it)
All charcters depicted are over 18 (As told at the start).
Sorry i have been abscent for a while, still disheartened about my "Room of Requirements" story being taken down and i know its strange that my comeback (after another 2 month hiatus as well) is only a page but i am trying with the ideas i have. The ones that Vertigor gave and the ones that i have in general but i am trying to get out of my rut with the storys development so hopefully i will, but in the mean time i hope you enjoy this brief but hopefully fun story.
Original Image based on : flockchan.deviantart.com/art/E…
(This wasn't a commision or anything just a very great respect for the art and intrest in it)
All charcters depicted are over 18 (As told at the start).
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I'm glad you sent me that note yesterday because I read this story of yours one or two days after you told me about it and I made a comment that DA apparently disintegrated. I wish they had the "drafts' feature that goes with Notes for comments too because at least when there is a glitch, the Note gets saved in a drafts folder. Not so with comments 
Anyway, I enjoyed the story. I liked the progression of how Sarah and John were so nervous about taking their relationship further and then just when they decide to explore further, the intruders showed up. I was taken totally by surprise (pleasantly) by that because I like stories with a reluctance, damsel in distress and non-consent feel to them. Your story delivered nicely and, even though things didn't go as planned for S and J, it seemed to work out well for them. (I like happy endings too, btw usually). Plus, it looked like they enjoyed making the best of a bad situation
It was a very sexy and erotic story and I'm glad you pointed it out to me!
Keep writing bondage stories. If this one of yours is indicative of your ability, I will gladly read more!
And, lastly, thank you also for reading Obsession and for the nice words you said about it.
Anyway, I enjoyed the story. I liked the progression of how Sarah and John were so nervous about taking their relationship further and then just when they decide to explore further, the intruders showed up. I was taken totally by surprise (pleasantly) by that because I like stories with a reluctance, damsel in distress and non-consent feel to them. Your story delivered nicely and, even though things didn't go as planned for S and J, it seemed to work out well for them. (I like happy endings too, btw usually). Plus, it looked like they enjoyed making the best of a bad situation
It was a very sexy and erotic story and I'm glad you pointed it out to me!Keep writing bondage stories. If this one of yours is indicative of your ability, I will gladly read more!
And, lastly, thank you also for reading Obsession and for the nice words you said about it.